A Little Bit of Both
Reviews For To Walk a Mile
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/17/2007 11:27 am
Another wonderful chapter, Thoth. I love Eloise's characterization. I especially liked the portion where she hexed off Eddie's eyes. He's a berk and he deserved it. :) Great job!
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/03/2007 11:45 am
Another delightful--though sad too--portrait! I so love it when a writer gives voice to the lesser canon characters. They are so deserving of more than a few sentences. And you seem to know them well. This is definitely Luna, and I like that she and her father roll down the hills of Ottery-St-C in the evenings. It reminds me of my own childhood.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks a bunch!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks a bunch!
A Crown of Daisies
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/03/2007 11:38 am
This is so very Goyle! You really got into his head and you write his thoughts exactly the way he thinks--slowly, painstakingly.
And the dialogue with Malfoy is a hoot! Also the ending. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks!
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