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Reviews For Vengeance
Reviewer: littlemisstragedy (Signed)
01/17/2007 02:59 pm
I hope you update soon so I can read more about this upcoming interaction between Hermione and Draco...THIS IS HILARIOUS!
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/18/2006 09:56 pm
Well, that was an interesting start! I'm a bit surprised Fred and George don't show a wee bit more remorse, since this is Hermione. Watch the formatting, some of your story is a bit off-kilter.
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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/18/2006 09:36 pm
Haha, this is amusing. Watch your formatting, though, and your grammar in particular. I dunno if you have a beta-reader, but if not I suggest you find one (you'll probably draw in more readers if you clean this up just a little bit; it's got a hecka lot of potential but needs a little polish).
One more bit of concrit: be careful not to overdo the twinspeak. They might finish each other's sentences, but they don't swap every four words.
Still, this made me laugh out loud a couple times, so nice job on the content.
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