Wonderful job. This story is very creative and original and I commend you for it. I love how you wrote Ginny's conflicting feelings in previous chapters and the way they raged back and forth. I also liked the "almost"- scenes" where Harry and Ginny would almost kiss, or almost make up, or almost do.... something. The way you ended the story was very satisfactory and I also loved that. Great job, continue to write!
Miss Radcliffe~